November 26, 2008
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No Words
#39 – NO WORDS
The words never form when he’s near her
So she seduces him with her silence
Her secret stares whisper private thoughts to him
She glides near him, her scent intoxicating
They touch in passing, no words do they say
He watches from the darkness, she smiles at the shadow
They make memories with their glances
Of heavenly romances and magic heartfelt moments
But… no words do they say
Comments (13)
i felt this one, yea.
*complex
smooth & subtle, I like. nothing wrong with a few lines that are subtle and sexy at the same time.
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@Stillpoetic - i love the heart!!!! awwwww… you heart islymore! i appreciate it so much! *me, blushing* thanks for commenting as usual. and i really do love the heart!!!
@Complex_Simplicity_0705 - look at chu creepin thru! thanx for commenting girlie! i appreciate it. i know when you speak, you real!
@ISLYMORE - you welcome. I see u putting it in. I can’t wait to read the next one
@Stillpoetic - im going out of town til Sunday, so we will see what i come back with. you know if i get around to writing, with all the family festivities going on.
@ISLYMORE - I am sure you will steal a chance to write something. I bet you take the book with you in case, and put someting epic down.
See what I mean? Way to go.
@Nomothetis - ha, youre a silly bird. just wanted to not rhyme, see how it flowed. i think it turned out well. thanx tho. your words have gotten to the “important ppl” status – so way to go you!
“no words do they say
He watches from the darkness …
memories with their glances
Of heavenly romances”
very nice piece here
hypnotic…seductive… beautiful!
@Stillpoetic - I love the hearts…=]
“she seduces him with her silence”<—That’s that GOOD GOOD right there…lol
i like this one a lot. it’s a reoccuring instance that well illustrated through this ‘no words’. i encourage you to keep it ‘write’ and put that pen down and get it out.
AA
so i feel like u just described the magical spell u put on people… its something in every word that you say like crack it hooks people.