November 19, 2008
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Silence
#33 – SILENCE
Silence slithers into the room sneakily
Finds its way to its prey and conquers them easily
The constriction from its coil continues until nothing is heard
And the venom from its fangs paralyzes all and any words
Before silence slithers slowly from the room.
Comments (10)
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The constriction from its coil continues until nothing else is heard
And the venom from its fangs paralyzes all and any words”
yeah Ilike that it feels just like it sounds
@Stillpoetic - nice to see you dude. i breezed thru yo page… haven’t commented yet. you post like 10 at a time and i cant post on them all. but i will when i got the time.
I like how you make your poems visual. It works.
@ISLYMORE - Yeah I breezed through your other one but my homey AA kinda said everything I wanted to say so I had to just agree. Yeah today was a biggie day No worries it was more of a tribute no more no less. get there if ya can. I will be back on the grizzly tomm. Its really good seeing you back on the writing block. You go girl.
Wow .. that’s amazing how you made something like silence be a creature of some sort!
@cash_presley - thanx for coming thru!!! i try to do things out of the box… it was interesting. someone gave me that topic and that is where it went.
the way the flow is setup seems like another sentence is coming at the end. it seems like a to be continued thing. maybe you do have a part two. is this all of it?
AA
@Arrive__Arcane - no… it’s not all, but its all for now.
@ISLYMORE - oh ok, i can dig that.
so can i jack this and put it somewhere…. since i want that to be my stage name…