November 6, 2008

  • FOUR for the girls

    FOUR  (For girls)

    As the perspiration dropped

    From the tip of your ‘locks

    To the sole of your Reeboks

    I slowly forgot

    All about my journey home

    Until I heard the trill of my phone

    Outside of that there was just you and I alone

    But that was mere confusion inside the emotional half of my dome

    See you were more

    Like a streetcar I desired for

    Rocking my mental straight to the core

    So I couldn’t decide between going home or…

    All the other things I don’t know about you

    Like how tall you are and what size shoe?

    Or if you gotta kid… maybe even two?

    And if there’s another lady you tryna pursue

    Do you have your own car?

    Do you live in a home not too far?

    Maybe we could get a drink, maybe go to the bar?

    Then sit at the park, on a cozy blanket, and wish upon a star?

    But that’d be a date…?

    And I’m not sure, so maybe we should wait?

    To see if this is more than happenstance, could this really be fate?

    Maybe, just maybe, you’re my Godsend mate?

    But why rush it… there’s other things I need to say first.

    Like what’s your occupation and how long have you worked?

    And if you have a child, were you there for his/her birth?

    And do you know the value of a real woman’s worth?

    But as the time edged closer to five

    Past me you walked right on by

    I couldn’t be mad, couldn’t even question why

    I just stood there dumbfounded, shook my head, and sighed

    Because this was only what I thought

    As the perspiration dropped

    From the tip of your ‘locks

    To the sole of your Reeboks

     

Comments (8)

  • Longing, wondering, never knowing… this is beautiful!

  • @MlleRobillard - thanks doll! i’m working on finding my poetic voice. i have like an online workshop going on i guess you would say. i think it’s working.

  • This is beautiful! :)  

  • These are gettin better and better… they all tell a story… (snaps)

    I think my fingers are going to be hurting after all this snapping…

    D

  • Man Makes me wanna go primetime, out here. girl you bringing it.

  • ooooh this is beautiful! I’m so glad I stumbled on a fellow poet ^^

  • Haha…you’ve captured it. Truly what may go on in a woman’s head when she sees someone that has caught her eye…hah, captured it. love it. This makes me laugh because I can really go through all those questions in my head…over just a fine man walking by or something.
    love it.

  • nice. simple thoughts on paper and it flowed nice. how i missed this one? i don’t know. solid lil piece lil homie.

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