November 6, 2008

  • Penmanship

    My pen lays the blueprint/of verbal archetypes/more powerful than Superman/My pen has no kryptonite/Because without it/There are no schematics/No prototypes/No semantics/And my pen still is/A greater warrior than Achilles/More seducing than Aphrodite/My pen is the judge, the jury, and the army/ Like the rooster at the stroke of dawn, my pen is constantly alarming/Sentences conquer and divide the page/The big joker of the deck, my pen is the highest spade/With it words contort and shape their own meanings/Found them woven together with no comprehension of what I’m seeing/Nouns slice the paper like grass meeting a machete/A barrage of bullet verbs attack the page hard and heavy/Like a chessboard/I just scored/It’s a wrap buddy, CHECKMATE/Unlike the bee that’s hit with the nicotine spray/

    MY PEN…

    WILL NEVER…

    FAINT!

  • Limericks

    The finale for the night… I gotta rest now.

    # 19 & 20 – LIMERICKS

     

                She called out to her lover

                He never did recover

                They ceased to exist

                His kisses she missed

                When she called him the name of her other.

     

     

                We walked on the beach by the sea

                Sang songs while the fish dance gleefully

                Embracing one another

                Our bodies we discover

              This boyfriend of hers and me

     

               

  • Clean/Dirty, Patiently, Quatrains

    # 16 – Diamante

    CLEAN/DIRTY

     

    CLEAN/DIRTY

    Clean

    Spotless, shiny

    Non-soiling, sparkling, freeing

    Fair, smooth, stain, tainted

    Darkening, spotting, fouling

    Sullied, impure

    Dirty

     


     

    # 17 – ACROSTIC  (PATIENTLY)

     

                Part of me

                Aching

                To be

                Inside your soul

                Eternally

                Never

                Taking

                Life from you just

                Yearning

     

    (PATIENTLY)

     


     

    # 18 – QUATRAIN (Something simple)

     

                I wanted to write this verse

                To show how easy it comes to me now

                But these lines are my worse

                Cause they don’t end with a bang or a pow

    the real quatrain for those wanting something less silly…

     

    Silently I’m watching, my pen aimed and ready

    He sees her standing there seductively, she is better than the rest

    He approaches the prey slow and steady 

    Then molds letters and sculpts words that tattoo her paper flesh

  • Cinquain

    # 14 and 15 – CINQUAIN

     

    Peace

    I found

    Inside of me

    I am made anew

    Whole

     

     

    Tears

    No longer

    Trail this cheek

    I know myself now

    Free

     

  • Villanelle – The Street

    # 13 – VILLANELLE  (THE STREET)

      

    From my window I can see the street

    Children playing, riding bikes

    Cars drive by and the passengers wave at me

               

    Neighbors gather with each other to greet

    Taking time for conversations of the friendly type

    From my window I can see the street

               

    Where sons learn to ride on two wheels instead of three

    And fathers watch carefully because fall he might

    Cars drive by and the passengers wave at me

     

    Mom takes a cake to the new lady she wants to meet

    But I’ll just stay inside the cool house and eat a bite

    From my window I can see the street

     

    Prop my feet up on a stool and take my seat

    Before a sudoku puzzle, I pause to take in the sight

    Cars drive by and the passengers wave at me

     

    The neighborhood overflows with people full of glee

    What a happy little place filling the world with light

    Cars drive by and the passengers wave at me

    From my window I can see the street

     

    ISLYmore © 11/6/08

     

  • Haikus

    Taking a stab at haikus…. Let me know if I’m doing this right.

    1. Haiku # 1

    angels guide us here

    passion swelling our bodies

    heaven is our bed

     

    2. Haiku # 2

    got there together

    finally getting to see

    HE makes me believe

November 5, 2008

  • Throwback

    Inspired by stillpoetic’s throwback.

    #10 - THROWBACK

    Bangles that jangle and dangle on the wrist/One-hooked overalls, striped tights, and babydoll dresses/Fanned ponytails and chinese-cut bangs/3A, 4C, and 5B were the only lunchroom gangs/Lunchtime games – tag, tetherball, and hopscotch/Ham and cheese, cheetos, and a fruit drink in the Carebear lunchbox/When $.30 was the fee for the sand dollar chocolate chip cookie/The first kiss behind the portable caused shouts of “aw sookie-sookie”/Doing the Running Man, the Reebok, and the Kid-N-Play/Cabbage patchin’ and roger rabbit’n at the block par-tay/Cause war began and end on the dance floor stage/And the next day is a new day, no matter what dance enemies are made.

  • Queen pt 2

     

    A Queen (pt 2)

    she can’t live without her other/because his strength gives her power/and his breath gives her life/so she was apart of him just as he was apart of her/he was her/and every morning she’d arise/hair combed, make-up applied/and headed into a world/not ready for her/broad shoulders and thin moustache/that was only seen because the way her lips curled at the corners/when she laughed/she was born different/born to be something she never felt she was/she never felt the thrusts of the secret between her legs/because in her head… she believed it was not real/a feeling she never, ever desired to feel… because she was never a man/at least not in her own eyes/but when she stepped into the streets/mean looks and evil smirks she would greet/stars and whispers she’d receive/from people who chose to perceive/her as an imposter/a fraud/a hypocrite/a worshipper of NO God/but this was not who she was/nor was it who he became/he was a woman in a man’s frame/a different character with a false name/because he always felt beautiful/she always felt best in a dress/yet no one chose to know her/because her was really a he/and he was not who he wanted to be/because in his eyes he was always a queen.

  • Queen pt 1

    Let me preface this blog… by saying… that it is two parts (pumping it out as i type) and the second part will be # 9.

     

    # 8 – A QUEEN (pt 1)

    She was always really beautiful/and his words made her smile/but while he was inside her/the pain lasted only for a little while/because she was young/and he was old/she was naive/and he broke his oath/when he married her mother/she became his slave/the old man wanted her/youth is what he craved/and night after night/when her mother left for work/he would creep into her room/and tug at her bedskirt/she’d pretend she was asleep/and ignore his advances/mommy would be at work a while/so he’d definitely take his chances/to slide into her twin sized bed/and gently run his fingers across her head/whisper tales of punishments in her ear/and she’d give in to what she’d hear/because she knew her mother never would believe/the things she’d say about he behavior she’d received/from the man supposed to protect her/keep her hidden from evils like himself… but he didn’t/and she didnt believe/that her stepfather could be/the same man who stole her virginity/but he was/and this night is just like every other night/when he eased his hands lower/and touched her undercovers/in ways he touched her mother… so she’d close her eyes/as he killed her pride/every time he climbed on top of her and slowly slid inside/she was not yet a woman/but he pleasured himself like she was/and she withdrew herself from the world and became another empty soul/her life was just time wasted/she never gained control/never knew she was born a princess/who had a destiny to embrace/so she never took her rightful place/in the great big scheme of things/because he stole her crown when she was young/and she never became a queen.

     

  • Toilet, Not, Two Words, Nothing

    # 4 – TOILET

    Tired of talking about love and how he broke me down, knocked me out, whored around/So I decided to talk about… being love’s toilet/yes i said toilet, so just listen – dont spoil it/ Love used me like a toilet and pissed all over me/left stains around the rim he never intended to clean/and the stench still lingers of the piss he deposited for free/love used me like a toilet and did the nastiest thing to me/he stood over me and regurgitated/words he couldn’t comprehend and over-complicated/disgusting remnants of verbs, nouns,and conjunctions he stated/love used me like a toilet and shit all over me/filled my soul with the foulest odor/emptying his emotional intake into me left me over/flowing full of pains constant floaters/and for the longest time love would come adn go as love pleased/giving me the time I needed to finally get the chance to breathe/since love cant seem to grasp the reason why the soap dispenser’s next to my sink of constantly running water/… this toilet’s finally out of order.

    From Stillpoetic: “So I decided to talk about… being love’s toilet/yes i said toilet, so just listen – dont spoil it” Unexpected very unexpected man oh man. WOW this is vile…. but dam good writing. I mean I can feel it. very descriptive. You held it down right here. Dam this is just plain wow. it was unexpected because o the flow of the poem, and I mant unexpected in a good way. I like its the surprise. sometmes poems can be predictable and the man oh man = No words I can say. I understand the different and I am like wow she is killin the game

    From Arrive__Arcane:  now this is exploration!!!! you’ve taken the pain and got mad creative with it. brill. this is your direction and topic of interest and look what you’ve done with it. you wrote with craft and skill, substance and flair. i like this new but old feel to you. isly, i can dig this

     

    # 5 – NOT

    i am mystified/every time you come around i get misty-eyed/playin that game of he loves me/he loves me not/got/repetitive like so many petals i dropped/not/ because i was looking for a dream, that perfect partner for this two-man team/not/because i was looking for an answer but what i thought i had really didn’t matter/but/because in my reverie you were a king/treated me like a queen/and gave all of yourself to me/but that was just a dream/not/reality.

    From Stillpoeticcan i say one word????? DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!  :-O

    From Arrive__Arcane:  um um um…b-r-i-l-l

     

    # 6 – TWO WORDS

    it hurt
    to think
    that things
    wont be
    the same
    you came
    my way
    didn’t say
    one word
    i heard
    what i
    guess i
    chose to
    from you
    told me
    that we
    could be
    some thing
    extra ordinary
    so it
    was fit
    i trust
    this lust
    but us
    was just
    a fling
    a thing
    you seemed
    to think
    was fake
    a game
    got to
    see you
    for truth
    you lose.

    From Stillpoetic: different the two words thing is great. it is always fun to play witht he poetic style of writing. Girl keep on keeping on

    From Arrive__Arcane: YOU MUTHAFUCKIN GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS. DAMMIT I’M BOUT TO WRITE RIGHT RIGHT NOW.

    # 7- NOTHING

    when
    i close my eyes
    its like
    i
    can visualize
    us
    we weren’t much
    but
    we
    were enough
    and i know that now
    we shared
    this soul
    but we’ve grown
    distant
    the instant
    i lied
    we died
    you look at me
    you saw me
    and i was nothing.

    From Stillpoetic:I can feel this one, really really feel it. I can see it. It is to the point and very openly emotional.