February 18, 2009
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I Pray
yeah so im back… dont know how long. cant really say. but i hope you enjoy the next few pieces i present. please, feel free to comment.
I pray today that some day you’d sway my way
They say… speak it into existence, this instant I claim
No fame, no games, no shame, and no reign
Unless you bless me with this gift – your name
A flame, my soul has grown for a face that I have never known
I own every thought of him, because of him every emotion is shown
I can’t deny that I have tried to hide the feelings I have for him
He belongs to me, my mystery that I have yet to decide to begin
Because decoding it would be too quick, I want to savor all of this
Starting with the touch I crave and the kisses that I already miss
As if they exist or did in a past, if so I’ve yet to remember them
So each time I pray you sway my way that day I wont have to pretend.
ISLYmore © 2/16/2009
Comments (6)
This has an obvious feel of wanting/desiring something you don’t have but feel you need…..I think it’d be interesting for you to to do a part 2, per say, of this where you actually get what you’ve been “praying” for…since sometimes expectations are better than the actual thing….
I like this tho….
@dafeelingsinside - interesting… interesting… maybe. i got something im working on now too. but i will keep that in mind. i like that idea.
oooooh weeeeeee!!!!! boy do i love this alliteration. This is the truth. I don’t necessarily see a part two. i love the ‘pray, sway, way, day’ allll man. i love it.
Nice very nice ms lady I seen U creeping back into the scene with some major heat. this one as a totaly feels like a rainy day poem just long enough to say everything think Janet jackson poetic justice. this to me feels so good. just real good
Beautiful…seems like I picked a good time to logg on and catch up to your post…I feel your confidence in the power of your words
I love the last 4 lines..which part did you enjoy reading the most in I PRAY??
@GoddessNailah - i like the intro 4 lines…. but i definitely loved the last 4 as well. thanks for coming by doll. you always manage to add something special when you comment. thanks for making me smile!