January 7, 2009
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Your Pictures
(Secret Lust, Anticipating, Chain Rhyme – AABA, BBCB, CCDC, DDDD – so… I got this idea from Mr. Parker, with the card flip overs and all. Thats my topic, emotion, and style. Hope you like this piece, I like it and I like where my writing is going. So enjoy or not. Let me know either way.)
I quietly scroll through your pictures and find myself fantasizing about you every chance I get
Sitting at the screen, I begin imagining how your hands feel on my body and quickly I become wet
Pretending that your lips are planting seduction’s flowers across my body, how badly I crave you
To have only this moment to taste your tantalizing skin would be worth it, it’d truly be perfectTo feel your hands massaging my skin softly as my legs spread slightly for you, if only you knew
How badly I want to feel your fingers then I’d know if your touch really is my one dream come true
Cause I’ve dreamed of you in ways I know I shouldnt, I wouldn’t ever be able to admit it though
But I know it’d be divine if your lips met mine, we’d view our souls’d combine as one instead of twoYet you remain, thousands of miles away, not knowing when I touch myself i imagine how it would go
How your kisses felt like satin tickling my inner thigh and I get hotter with each breath you blow
My body begging to feel your pressures, feel your rhythym and blues measures boom to my erotic beat
Deplete every drop of my love as you go while you continue to put on your best taste-testing showLet me flow down your chin before you slide in, before you dive into my wetness and test its reach
Those orgasmic moments I’ve shared with you many times, you’d find I’d share them if we could speak
But you stray away from thinking like this, I’m aware, I know I dont do for you what you do for me
So I secretly view your pictures, the fantasies secretly continue, even if only for my eyes to see.
Comments (19)
i like this writing you do nee’. damn i do. you gone like that card flipping, i know you will. wow. aaba bbcb ccdc dddd…never did that before. i think i’mma do a AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. yea, that’ll do the trick. get some sleep. don’t stay up late like me to turn around in 3 hours and put on a presentation like only i know how to do. peace.
You’re going to make all your readers take a cold shower before work today
. As always, you write with vivid clarity and intensity. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
“Let me flow down your chin”
Haha……you so naaaaaaaaaaasty!
whoa! I like it in the morning…..
Good one! Shucks, at first I thought you were talking just to me! lol
@Arrive__Arcane - as usual, thanks for coming thru. truly. did u finish that homework since we up late and all? hope the presentation went well.
@MlleRobillard - i like to start the morning out right. what can i say? thanks for coming thru Jess. i always appreciate your comments.
@dafeelingsinside - dang! why i gotta be nasty? hmm… i know plenty of men that have no problem with chin juice! lol.
@Mahogany_Nymph - me too girl! me too! they dont understand.
@BEAUTIFULCINNAMONQUEEN - yeah well we wont tell anyone okay? lol.
@ISLYMORE - Lol…i dont have a problem w/ it either…im just sayin lol….
@dafeelingsinside - yeah we know YOU don’t have a problem with it
@Mahogany_Nymph - Lol….if I was a self-conscious type guy…that would of offended me lol…..good thing I’m not…thanks for the compliment! LMAO
@dafeelingsinside - @Mahogany_Nymph - now who’s naaaaasssstyyyy? *and we ALL know Larry has no problem with chin juice – thanks for clearing that up girl, i thot it was an assumption of my own that had no warrants!*
@ISLYMORE - you make me sound like i’m some sort of freak or something….how dare you!
@dafeelingsinside - its okay to be a freak! lol… women love them!
Wow… This was really good. Secretly, I’ve always wanted to be a poet. I just don’t have it in me!
@SoAnonyMiss - thanks truly! welcome to the page, feel free to comment anytime you’d like or just visit period. i’m really gonna do your challenge though! i think being a poet is more than just writing words that rhyme… its an expression of life for me. i write everyday, some things aren’t poetry, some things are just words. but i enjoy it tremendously.
look at me rambling! thanks for coming by and commenting i appreciate it deeply.
@ISLYMORE - I think my issue with poetry is that I edit it and scrutinize and think about it too much. Prose just flows for me. Poetry makes me feel clumsy and vulnerable. I would love to give it more of an honest effort.
I look forward to reading your response to the challenge. And I will be dropping in often!!
@SoAnonyMiss - well you could always look into free verse poetry. doesnt have to rhyme if the rhyming part is the problem for you. i don’t really know if what i am writing for the challenge is accurate, but it’s what i felt needed to be expressed. i don’t really dig prose like that for some reason, i like to rhyme! lol. but don’t think about it, just write is what i say.
speechless… is crazy the type of imagery that was playing out in my mind. i’m going to leave it at that. ha
@CommonSense411 - oh if only you had pics…
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