December 17, 2008
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Thrown Memories
# 48 - Thrown Memories (Thanks Mr. Parker, you get cred)
throw my memory away, dont call me again, dont mention my name
forget about my classy ways, those classless babes dont love the same
you’ll see, by then itll be too late, i wont remember what you look like
wont remember how angry you made me, wont remember every stupid little fight
matter of fact, you dont even deserve the time i’ve spent letting tears fall
you arent even worth the energy ive lost, you were never deserving of all
or any of the parts of me that i allowed you to take FROM me
we were never meant to see this us, we were simply never meant to be
but instead of allowing myself to be honest with myself about all of it
i played into the fallacy of what we should be, i thought you were my fit
i was addicted to what you gave me, that extra good game you played
had me drawn like a moth to a flame from that extra great pipe you layed
you betrayed my emotions purposefully, tied the noose around them with your words
then allowed your pride to watch them hang and for that your name will never be heard
never again will i mention you, you aren’t even allowed to tiptoe through any thought
after these last few lines you’re completely dismissed, you are completely forgot
just like the best parts of me you threw away thinking i’d never find them again
i had to delete some files from my mental cabinet, throw some things in the trash bin
so before this gets too personal and i throw hate daggers at your black soul
throw my memory away, like i’ve done yours, our history will never be re-told.
Comments (16)
“Thrown Memories”
that’s my title. and i like the cadence of it all. very nice rhythm. i’d chage a pair of lines but hey, that’s just me. u know which ones i’m talkin bout (right?) so would this be the same forgotten one from ummm “29? cus i just doubled back to 29 and that thang was smoking. no more profanity. i talked to 212 and we agreed to step it up and keep it clean. i’m on some new new right now. bout to go write a lil sumn sumn. keep this pace and you’ll hit a hundred in 2010. GET IT WRITE GIRL. and i like how YOU pair up words and you know i love the internal rhyme of things.
@Arrive__Arcane - nope. hit me with a message about the two lines you’d change and ill see how i feel about it. no this isnt the same forgotten one, this actually was directed to no one, until the last two lines, when i felt myself beginning to feel a lil anger. so i had to cut it off. but #29 is a different emotion all together about a different person. 2010 eh? ill try. i dunno if im rushing to do it anymore, i still am getting the hang of just writing without needing the extra inspiration. ya know how it goes with me! quit clownin!
*snap* *snap*
you tell em girl
i like the fact that you told somebody off, and it was clean AND classy. in addition, this can be applied to both a person you’re in a romantic relationship with, and someone you consider your friend.
nicely written
@miss_thiq - i took a different route and i wanted to “tell someone off”. i wanted to tell someone off and it not be about an actual person. so i’m glad you saw it could go either way! someone else missed that. i appreciate you coming thru and commenting.
(snaps)
well… I did like this poem a lot… it shows that you can express your anger without being ignorant… very indirect and it keeps you wondering… it’s a real good piece and I enjoyed reading it….
now how about THAT for a comment… hmph
talkin about “oh boo you”…
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@dadj_21 - yay! im glad you commented! you never do anymore, work must really have you lock’d down. its cool. i made the boo you comment bc you commented a pulse but didnt comment anything else? i’ve had some great pieces lately! you dont even come visit briefly. so yeah, boo you!
@ISLYMORE - I do what I can… so boo you for booing me…. hmph
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@dadj_21 - you still gets no pass for all the one’s you’ve missed. i even wrote another blog with LOTS of pics! lol… you been slackin.
I can really relate to this- it brought me back to that time, in fact. Good work!
@MomWithoutaMinivan - im so happy you commented! your comments are always so genuine. thanks for coming thru and leaving your thoughts.
as always, u know i’d give more props if i could…keep scribin the writing, ma…
@BlakThot - good to see you. long time. hope you are well, hope you are getting better. nice to see you, really.
“we were never meant to see this us, we were simply never meant to be
but instead of allowing myself to be honest with myself about all of it
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good lines very good lines
ryc: i’m sorry i let you down.
wow, i pray i’m never the guy that influences a woman to write those lines. here’s the line that knocked me in the face.
“you betrayed my emotions purposefully, tied the noose around them with your words/
then allowed your pride to watch them hang and for that your name will never be hear”
i’m not the big analyzer either, but i’m sure we can pick up a good rhyme when we see it. you’re workin’ it. keep it up! and thanks for stopping by and leaving some love!
@CommonSense411 - aint them lines dope? (if my english professor saw that sentence. lol)
i reread it. hella skilled. you are potent with cha words isly. i dont wanna say ya name and have the epidemic start up again but you know that you’re good and if you have to search then keep searching and let us know what you find. until then, stay write