November 8, 2008

  • Writer’s Block

    WRITER’S BLOCK

    It’s like my lungs won’t expand and I need to breathe

    Like… the words don’t form when I need to speak

    Like… can’t find a pen and got barrels of ink

    Like… no memories appearing and I need to think

     

    Writer’s block…

     

    It’s like wanting to keep living but having no heartbeat

    Like… wanting to fill a hunger but there’s not food to eat

    Like… needing to travel distances and having no feet

    Like… trying to move mountains and being just a little too weak

     

    Writer’s block…

     

    It’s like trying to make a sentence and not thinking of any verbs

    Like… screaming loud as you can and never being heard

    Like… riding on a boogie-board and can’t catch the smallest surf

    Like… having a million dollars but never knowing worth

     

    Writer’s block…

     

    It’s like trying to plant a seed and not finding any dirt

    Like… begging to feel pain and not knowing what is hurt

    Like… wanting to catch a man and being unable to flirt

    Like… going for a touchdown and running the wrong way on the turf

     

    I’m tryna write right with all my might…

    But… That’s what writer’s block feels like.

     

     

     

Comments (8)

  • That is so tight!!!! to have writers block, then write something about writer’s block… one of the best works yet…

    D

  • I agree too

    It’s like my lungs won’t expand and I need to breathe
    Like… the words don’t form when I need to speak
    Like… can’t find a pen and got barrels of ink
    Like… no memories appearing and I need to think”
     
     those right there set it off for me. I feel like I am right there. feeling the same thing.
     
    It’s like trying to make a sentence and not thinking of any verbs
    Like… screaming loud as you can and never being heard
    Like… riding on a boogie-board and can’t catch the smallest surf
    Like… having a million dollars but never knowing worth
     
    this section too. it is a direct tie into what it must feel like and will feel like wow go head narrator
     
     

  • you did well with this one… writing about having writer’s block.

    *complex

  • amen to that.  writing about writer’s block is the BEST cure for writer’s block.  haha.

    *high five*

  • I like the repetition of the Like…this would be an interesting spoken piece. and I agree with ThebigShow…writing is the best cure for writers block. I always think of writers block as sooo much to say that one is not sure where to start or how to end…sometimes it’s just great to begin anywhere and ride that wave until you reach the bottom of the ocean and come up and try again.

    ~Angel~

  • @A_Rose_Exposed - yeah… lol… it was interesting to say the least. it was fun tho.

  • once again. this writing of yours is getting better. you did it again. and you’ll do it again and again. get used to it. i need your writing number to reach a hun before the new year. GO

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