November 8, 2008
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Not the Average Girl
#27 – AVERAGE GIRL
(sings: Im not the average girl from your video/And I aint built like a supermodel/But, I learned to love myself unconditionally/Because I am a queen/Im not the average girl from your video/My worth is not determined by the price of my clothes/No matter what Im wearing I will always be…)
well… I’m not the average girl from the video/not/ tryna be in one either or hang out at the studio/though/it’s nice to be adored, you can’t afford my price/ I alone have more worth than what the FDIC can supply/I’m built on concrete ideas and TNT dreams that’ll blow your mind/Search the complexity of my being/The visual aid is misleading/Even if you were my thoughts/You’d never know what I was thinking/Try diving into the deepest and darkest of my mental corners/Delve into all of me and dare to find my 7 wonders/Unravel the secrets of my brain just to begin to see the puzzle/Reach the caverns of my soul that have yet to be discovered/Hold my heart in your hands and feel the ache of my heartbeat/The ripple of my emotions will lead to notions of knowing/My fantasies/Will leave you panting/Sweating/In my suana sweltering/Yet still you’re measuring/by the surface see/and the surface me is more deserving/of preserving than all the treasures of the world/Examine me and look deeper… I’m not the average girl.
ISLYmore 11/8/08
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My fantasies/Will leave you panting/Sweating/In
my suana sweltering/Yet still you’re measuring/by the surface see/and
the surface me is more deserving/of preserving than all the treasures
of the world/Examine me and look deeper… I’m not the average girl.
this was the best part for me…
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@dadj_21 - i bet… you’re a perv! lol…
i love this…i’m definitely NOT the average girl
@ISLYMORE - I can’t believe you would throw such harsh words my way
:… besides… you should check out my piece that i wrote early this morning 
@miss_thiq - is that so?
D
Pretty good poem….as a Devil’s advocate, I’d have to note that your style is eerily similar to that of Arrive_Arcane’s…so although your words are yours….is the style that you use the one that the “inner you” prefers or is it perhaps driven by a style that you’ve grown to love and adapt to….I merely ask because your style from what you first posted(your older works) and compared to your newer works(the consistency amongst them all points to the same style….I hope you don’t take this the wrong way, I’m merely presenting it in a different light since you’re on your quest to rediscover and enhance the “inner you” that’s your source of inspiration……I wish you the best as you continue to grow poetically and inspirationally
@dadj_21 - and you know this…man!
@dafeelingsinside - oh no. this one was just more comfortably written that way. i alternate all kinds of patterns and styles of writing – hence my changing of styles in the last 2-3 days. i’ve written in all formats. it’s just varies by the piece. but i will try to stray from the AA style of writing, since it’s his and all – just for you! *i could re-type it if you like.* or maybe i will post the next one in blocked format, so there will be no confusion. altho… the slashes are for me, my breaks when i speak them outloud.
@dadj_21 - it’s in sweetness. no meanie too it at all boo!
@ISLYMORE - Lol, by no means would I ask you to change anything you do just for me
. When I referred to style inspirations, I was not referring to stictly the “/’ marks. I understand that’s jsut for an ease of typing. When I say style, I refer to word diction, choice, arrange, literary arrangements, etc. We had that talk about me and how I read words and the path it takes me along. I wasn’t implying that any of this was a bad thing either. I was just merely expressing something for you to consider…that’s all 
@dafeelingsinside - oh i didn’t take it as a bad thing sir. i took it in and i’ll work on it. even though i’m not working on writing like anyone else, this format was just the way this one came out. but artist to artist – i dig. no problems.
“Reach the caverns of my soul that have yet to be discovered/Hold my heart in your hands and feel the ache of my heartbeat”
Oh my dam. This is hot. I really like this right here. you are really getting it in.
<—-Not average?! I’M HIGHLY UNAVERAGE….Wait, can I be “highly unaverage”?! *shrugs*
@BLUtifulZETA - i guess it’s possible. average/unaverage/highly unaverage… all true. i’m not average either. but when it started coming it just came that way. this will be my last for a while. taking a mental break.
I like the lines –even if you were my thought you’d never know what i was thinkin. i like that
AA
I alone have more worth than what the FDIC can
supply/I’m built on concrete ideas and TNT dreams that’ll blow your
mind/Search the complexity of my being/The visual aid is
misleading/Even if you were my thoughts/You’d never know what I was
thinking
Oooo…do it! And you said you had writer’s block. This is goooood. Where’s the next post.
@lastingoptions - I do have writer’s block something bad, but I’m tryna break out of it… tryin not to feed into it. Scratch that. I’m learning to break out of it and not feed into not writing. Thanks Mr. 1%. I’m writing as we speak. See ya around for that one.
@ISLYMORE - Mr. 1% ….ooo can’t wait
@lastingoptions - don’t take that too serious! lol. he just said some things i needed to hear about my pulse and i’m trying to face them…
@ISLYMORE - I got ya…
“I’m built on concrete ideas and TNT dreams that’ll blow your mind/Search the complexity of my being/The visual aid is misleading/Even if you were my thoughts/You’d never know what I was thinking” I love the sound of that and the meaning behind it is exquisite…Brings me back to certain memories I’d rather forget lol but that’s a good thing.
~Angel~