November 5, 2008
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Queen pt 1
Let me preface this blog… by saying… that it is two parts (pumping it out as i type) and the second part will be # 9.
# 8 – A QUEEN (pt 1)
She was always really beautiful/and his words made her smile/but while he was inside her/the pain lasted only for a little while/because she was young/and he was old/she was naive/and he broke his oath/when he married her mother/she became his slave/the old man wanted her/youth is what he craved/and night after night/when her mother left for work/he would creep into her room/and tug at her bedskirt/she’d pretend she was asleep/and ignore his advances/mommy would be at work a while/so he’d definitely take his chances/to slide into her twin sized bed/and gently run his fingers across her head/whisper tales of punishments in her ear/and she’d give in to what she’d hear/because she knew her mother never would believe/the things she’d say about he behavior she’d received/from the man supposed to protect her/keep her hidden from evils like himself… but he didn’t/and she didnt believe/that her stepfather could be/the same man who stole her virginity/but he was/and this night is just like every other night/when he eased his hands lower/and touched her undercovers/in ways he touched her mother… so she’d close her eyes/as he killed her pride/every time he climbed on top of her and slowly slid inside/she was not yet a woman/but he pleasured himself like she was/and she withdrew herself from the world and became another empty soul/her life was just time wasted/she never gained control/never knew she was born a princess/who had a destiny to embrace/so she never took her rightful place/in the great big scheme of things/because he stole her crown when she was young/and she never became a queen.
Comments (7)
deep. i like the cadence and how you paced it. gimme sumn happy after part 2. no more pain for the rest of the week.
WOW Powerful, real powerful. you are getting it in girl. there is no line that surpasses the other they are all. just …. … … … … … ……
@Arrive__Arcane - 9 is already wrote and finished. lol. sorry. it’s different and it just came. i will lean towards happy that is my goal for the rest of the wk.
@Stillpoetic - thanks man.
altho you both likely won’t relate to the next one… lol. and i think i’m going silent with Ste’phane until he goes back to class 1, 2, and 3.
@ISLYMORE - what is 1,2, and 3,? where are they. you aint write about the pictures? where are they? show me!
this made me want to cry…beautiful. Just beautiful
guess you can’t part 2 w/o part one… I guess I’m in dyslexic mode… anyway you cut it, it’s still hot to me
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Now this was….wow…..I felt like i was that young girl going through all of that…..I’m speechless at the power of this one…good job..