October 24, 2008
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Something old… and still very true…
Maybe you will catch the rhythym… maybe you won’t. It shouldn’t be too hard. But if it is, oh well. Figure it out. And please don’t duplicate this work… it is mine and
no one else’s. If you’ve seen it, I am the author, always have been.He Was My End Before I Even Began
He was my end before I even began to believe in love
Before I even knew what all it consists of
And
Before I even became to be
He completed me like water nourishes the seed
Like the air completes the earth
I bleed him internally
He was… with me since birth love…
My Creator
See he gave his rib
So I could have all twelve of these
We breathe
Each other
My Adam
His Eve… See
His soul completes
Every bit of me
His heart beats doubly
One for me and one for himself
We are each other’s wealth
Accruing thru time
He makes me feel like fine wine
And even then he was the grape
That gave his life to create me
He was my end before I even began to want a love
See back when boys were the enemy
And little girls had cooties
He was immune to my disease -I’ve always been his only
See
He needs to breathe and I inhale FOR him
I love him more than love can explain it herself
We
Are our own individual planet
Just he and just me
We
Are the perfect yin yang
We
Are complete
He was my end before I even began to feel the tingles
I get every time I see him
I dreamed of him ever since I could dream
He’s been apart of me
Even before I had time to understand living
I craved him
Couldn’t be without him
He was my best friend
So don’t think I’m crazy for talking so strange
Since I was speaking a language
That only he… and I speak
And even if I was deaf, dumb, AND blind…
He would hear, learn, and see FOR me
He was my end before I even began to know what love isn’t
Instead of what I thought it was
These feelings for him
Have been buried for eternity
Only for him to find
As his were meant just for me
He is my second to every minute
Without him- there is no time
There is no place
There is no memory
Because he is all that matters to me…
My KING and I am his COUNTRY
I am his all and he is my everything
He was my only and I was his infinitely
Because he…
Was always my ending even before I had a beginning.
© 7/23/05 ISLYmore
Comments (14)
I assume that this is about God rather than a person; either way, it’s beautiful.
WORD! It’s been a hot minute how are u doin? I changed my email address after I kept getting more spam than anything else, and I was missing real ones from the spam etc etc…but that’s how hotmail does…Things one this side are going, some good, some bad, but forward nonetheless…Wut’s good with u? My new address i cjessamy@gmail.com, btw
“I bleed him internally”!?!?!?
Daaaaaang. Now that was one hell of a line……I loved this….
I hope you don’t mind but I’m gonna let someone read this because this was just….yea…this is THAT thing that you gotta let the person you love read…..
@dafeelingsinside - wow… then let them read. i shall post more at some point, im trying not to post too many poems in one day, but i may invest in double post days! i hope she enjoys the poem as well. she must let me know or you must let me know tho if she does!
@ISLYMORE - She loved it…she referred to it as “Great”…..she also saw my reply to it and I kinda forgot that she could see that….so yea…the part about “let the person you love read”….yea….that was news to her haha…um…whoops?
@dafeelingsinside - lol…
dun dun dun!
This was astonishing…just awesome…
I loved it.
@dafeelingsinside - yeah… dun dun dun is exactly right!!! I appreciate the love folks! i dont think it was a whoops tho’ - i think you did it purposefully! and it was smooth, ill give you that.
this is fiyah…. good job…
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@Karamelqt - thanks! I appreciate the response and the add! Come back anytime…
@dadj_21 - thanks for the love. I hope to see you around when I post more!
“He completed me like water nourishes the seed
Like the air completes the earth”
this is dope. it is so free flowing and open and heartfelt and honest. No where to go wrong. I can almost see you writing it & feel the emotion on the page.
@Stillpoetic - thanks hun. i’m working to get to your status!!! lol..
@ISLYMORE - My status? LOL if U want it I’ll pass it over, so I can watch you take it to the house
I dunno why I thought about this but I remember this poem is how I ended up telling Trenay I loved her…..ha….funny thing……
anyway…where are u woman!?