November 6, 2008
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The Conversation
#23 – THE CONVERSATION
Can I call you sometime?
Maybe we could discuss the metaphysical of us
And the lust we created in our past time
You know… the BC and the AD of our past lives
The one that intertwines you and I like a rope
One strand was you and in the same place was I… hope
You remember us like I do
Like how I am the beginning and you are the ending of the same line
Can I call you sometime?
Maybe we could debate
The ways, the how’s, and the where’s of the love we made
How our bodies combined and time/
Froze
Became nonexistent
The instant your fleshed touched mine
Can I call you sometime?
Maybe we could spend a moment to converse
If only I could speak the lines I have rehearsed
You know…
“I hate to like you but I love to want you”
“Hate to call you but I love to hear you”
“Hate to see you but I love to miss you”
“Can’t stand how you touch me but I love to feel you”
“Irritates me to think of you but I love to spend dreams with you”
Yea… those lines…
I’d say them to you if I could call you sometime.
Comments (5)
Metaphysical is a word not many people use. I’m impressed solely with your use of it.
The 4th line w/ BC and AD was classic… that drew me in from the word go
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you took this one and went to the house with it. Man I got work to do. it is so impressive
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<td id=”HB_Focus_Element” valign=”top” width=”100%” background=”" height=”250″ unselectable=”off”>she’s impressed with metaphysical? lol. that’s funny. more funny than i really wanna admit. i love the question series. some combinations i never thought to use. pretty swell writing
Wow. I agree, I love the series of questions. Again, you started it out great and ended it great.