November 6, 2008
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That Kiss
# 24 – THAT KISS
My passiodometor swells
Every time I see this male
Inside I know we share the same dreams
Having mental conversations so we never ever speak
See we shared many moments like this
When he looks my way
Its as if our eyes kiss
That kiss
I miss
Like it
Exists
Like vision return to the blind’s eyesight
Like tiny shockwaves racing to my mind
Like millions of molecules combining at the same time
That kiss
I miss
Like it
Exists
Like the raindrops falling after a long summer drought
Like the final few seconds of the longest bout
Like the confirmation of a mind that’s been full of doubt
That kiss
I miss
Like it
Exists
Like the release of many years worth of yearning
Like the dismissal of class when the clock stops working
Like the escape of waters from the dam walls bursting
That kiss
I miss
Like it
Exists
That kiss.
Comments (7)
Structue’s good, concepts, great, and the words are even better… it’s a good description of a very explosive and sensual attraction
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I agree with D.
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Having mental conversations so we never ever speak
See we shared many moments like this
“
gotta love this line
u are getting it in
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My passiodometor swellsEvery time I see this maleInside I know we share the same dreamsHaving mental conversations so we never ever speakSee we shared many moments like thisWhen he looks my wayIts as if our eyes kiss…damn…a passiondometor? Wow. I know THAT feeling. And I just love how you started it and the concept of the repetition of
“That kissI missLike itExists”
@dadj_21 - D how so you get tobe the FIRST to reply on ALL the poetry entries….lol no fair “fast finger freddy”….
That kiss….*blushes*
@BLUtifulZETA - LOL… it’s skill baby…
D
Very nice, very rhythmical.